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February 20, 2012


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I do not own My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, I just own the Ocs.
I asked one of my friends if I should do an OC version of the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and she I can if I want to.  But, this will have the same background characters, villans, etc.

    Narrator: Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the eldest used her unicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn. The younger brought out the moon to begin the night. Thus, the two sisters maintained balance for their kingdom and their subjects: all the different types of ponies.
    But as time went on, the younger sister became resentful. The ponies relished and played in the day her elder sister brought forth, but shunned and slept through her beautiful night. One fateful day, the younger unicorn refused to lower the moon to make way for the dawn. The elder sister tried to reason with her, but the bitterness in the young one's heart had transformed her into a wicked mare of darkness: Night Mare Moon. She vowed that she would shroud the land in eternal night.
    Reluctantly, the elder sister harnessed the most powerful magic known to ponyville: The Elements of Harmony! Using the magic of The Elements of Harmony, she defeated her younger sister and banished her permanently in the moon. The elder sister took on responsibility for both sun and moon--

Sunny: "...and harmony has been maintained in Equestria for generations since." Hmm... Elements of Harmony. I know I've heard of those before, but where?

(cue theme song)

Random Pony: There you are, Sunny. Moondancer is having a little get-together in the west castle courtyard. You wanna come?

Sunny: Oh, sorry girls. I got a lot of studying to catch up on.

Random Pony 2: Does that pony do anything except study?

Random Pony 3: I think she's more interested in books than friends.

Sunny: I know I've heard of the Elements of Harmony.

(Shows a scene of Sunny running up to Canterlot  Castle, and you see Donnie(new char, Sunny's assistant) walking with a present, but the door hits him)

Donnie: Ow!

Sunny: Donnie! Donnie! Donnie? There you are. Quick, find me that old copy of "Predictions and Prophecies". What's that for?

Donnie: Well, it was a gift for Moondancer, but--

Sunny: Oh, Donnie, you know we don't have time for that sort of thing.

Donnie: But we're on a break.

Sunny: No. No. No. No, no, no. Ugh. Donnie!

Donnie: It's over here.

Sunny: Ah! Elements, Elements, E, E, E... Aha! "Elements of Harmony, see: Mare in the Moon"?

Donnie: Mare in the Moon? But that's just an old ponies' tale.

Sunny: Mare, Mare, a-ha! "The Mare in the Moon: myth from olden pony times. A powerful pony who wanted to rule Equestria, defeated by the Elements of Harmony and imprisoned in the moon. Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, the stars will aid in her escape and she will bring about nighttime eternal. [gasp] Spike, do you know what this means?

Donnie: No. Whoa! Ack.

Sunny: Take a note, please. To the princess.

<Donnie: Okie dokie.

: My dearest teacher. My continuing studies of pony magic have led me to discover, that we're on the precipice of disaster...

Donnie: Hold on. Preci... preci...

Sunny: Threshold.

Donnie: Thre...

Sunny: Uh, brink? Ugh! That something really bad is about to happen. For you see, the mythical Mare in the Moon is in fact Night Mare Moon and she's about to return to Equestria and bring with her eternal night. Something must be done to make sure this terrible prophecy does not come true.

    I await your quick response.
    Your faithful student,

Donnie: Sunny. Got it.

Sunny: Great! Send it.

Donnie: Now?

Sunny: Of course.

Donnie: Uh, I don't know, Sunny. Princess Celestia is a little busy getting ready for the Summer Sun Celebration, and it's like the day after tomorrow.

Sunny: That's just it, Sunny. The day after tomorrow is the thousandth year of the Summer Sun Celebration. It's imperative that the princess is told right away.

Donnie: Impera... impera...

Sunny: Important!

Donnie: Aah! Okay, okay. [gasp] There! It's on its way, but I wouldn't hold your breath.

Sunny: Oh, I'm not worried, Donnie. The princess trusts me completely. In all the years she's been my mentor, she's never once doubted me. See? I knew she would want to take immediate action.

Donnie:     [clears throat] My dearest, most faithful student, Sunny,
    You know that I value your diligence and that I trust you completely</b>--

Sunny: Mm-Hm.

Donnie: --But you simply must stop reading those dusty old books.

Sunny: [gasp]

Donnie: My Dear Sunny. There is more to a young pony's life than studying, so I'm sending you to supervise the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration in this year's location, Ponyville, and I have an even more essential task for you to complete: make some friends.

Sunny: [groan]

Donnie: Look on the bright side, Sunny. The princess arranged for you to stay in a library. Doesn't that make you happy?

Sunny: Yes! Yes it does. You know why? Because I'm right. I'll check on the preparations as fast as I can, then get to the library and find some proof of Night Mare Moon's return.

Donnie: Then when will you make friends, like the Princess said?

Sunny: She said to check on preparations. I am her student and I'll do my royal duty, but the fate of Equestria does not rest on me making friends. Thank you, sirs.

[Royal guards huff]

Donnie: Maybe the ponies in Ponyville have interesting things to talk about? Come on, Sunny. Just try.

Sunny: Uh... Hello?

Sparkleblue: [gasp]

Sunny: Well that was interesting all right.

Donnie: [sigh]

Donnie: Summer Sun Celebration, Official Overseer's Checklist: Number one: banquet preparations, Sweet Cherry Acres.

Cherryjack: YEE-HAW!

Sunny: [sigh] Let's get this over with. Good afternoon. My name is Sunny--

Cherryjack: Well, howdy-do, Miss Sunny. A pleasure makin' your acquaintance. I'm Applejack. We here at Sweet Apple Acres sure do like makin' new friends.

Donnie: Friends? Actually, I--

Cherryjack: So, what can I do you for?

Donnie: [giggle]

Sunny: Ahem... Well, I am in fact here to supervise preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration. And you're in charge of the food?

Cherryjack: We sure as sugar are. Would you care to sample some?

Sunny: As long as it doesn't take too long.

[triangle tinging]

Cherryjack: Soup's on, everypony! Now, why don't I introduce y'all to the Cherry  family?  

Sunny: Thanks, but I really need to hurry...

Cherryjack: This here's Cherry Fritter, Cherry Bumpkin, Red Gala, Red Delicious, Golden Delicious, Caramel Cherry, Cherry Strudel, Cherry Tart, Baked Cherry, Cherry Brioche, Cherry Cinnamon Crisp... [gasp] Big Cherrytosh, Cherry Bloom, aaaand Grampy Dan. Up and at 'em Grampy Dan, we got guests.

Grampy Dan: [snore] Wha--? Soup's on, I'm ah, here I come, ah comin'...

Cherryjack: Why, I'd say they're already part of the family.

Sunny: [spit] [giggle nervously] Okay, well, I can see the food situation is handled, so we'll be on our way.

Cherry Bloom: Aren't you gonna stay for brunch?

Sunny: Sorry, but we have an awful lot to do...

Cherry Family: Awww...

Sunny: Fine.

Cherry Family: [cheers]

Donnie: Food's all taken care of. Next is weather.

Sunny: Ugh... I ate too much pie.

Donnie: Hmm... There's supposed to be a Pegasus pony named 4-Leaf Clover clearing the clouds.

Sunny: Well, she's not doing a very good job, is she? Ugh! [grumble]

4-Leaf Clover: giggle] Uh, excuse me. [giggle] Let me help you. [giggles] Oops. I guess I overdid it. Um, uh, how about this? My very own patented 4-Leaf-Dry. No no, don't thank me. You're quite welcome. [laughs]

Donnie: [laughs]

Sunny: Let me guess, you're 4-Leaf Clover.

4-Leaf Clover: The one and only! Why? You heard of me?

Sunny: I heard you're supposed to be keeping the sky clear. [sigh] I'm Sunny and the Princess sent me to check on the weather.

4-Leaf Clover: Yeah, yeah. That'll be a snap. I'll do it in a jiffy, just as soon as I'm done practicing.

Sunny: Practicing for what?

4-Leaf Clover: The Wonderbolts. They're gonna perform at the celebration tomorrow, and I'm gonna show 'em my stuff.

Sunny: The Wonderbolts?

4-Leaf Clover: Yup.

Sunny: The most talented flyers in all of Equestria?

4-Leaf Clover: That's them.

Sunny: Pfft. Please. They'd never accept a Pegasus who can't even keep the sky clear for one measly day.

4-Leaf Clover: Hey. I could clear the sky in ten seconds flat.

Sunny: Prove it.

4-Leaf Clover: [grunts] Loop-de-loop around and WHAM! What'd I say? Ten. Seconds. Flat. I'd never leave Ponyville hanging. Ha ha, you should see the look on your face. Ha, you're a laugh,Sunny. I can't wait to hang out some more.

Donnie: Wow. She's amazing! [chuckle] Wait. It's kinda pretty once you get used to it.

(At the decor)

Donnie: Decorations. Beautiful.

Sunny: Yes. The decor is coming along nicely. This oughtta be quick. I'll be at the library in no time. Beautiful indeed.

Donnie: Not the decor, her.

Silky Kilt:  No. No. No. Oh, goodness no.

Donnie: How are my spines? Are they straight?

Sunny: Good afternoon.

Silky Kilt: Just a moment, please. I'm "in the zone" as it were. Oh, yes. Sparkle always does the trick, does it not? Why, Silky, you are a talent. Now, how can I help youuuuaAARGH! Oh my stars. Lassie, what ever happened to your coiffure?

Sunny: Oh, you mean my mane? Well, it's a long story. I'm just here to check on the decorations  and then I'll be out of your hair.  

Silky Kilt: Out of my hair? What about your hair?

Sunny: Wait, where are we going? Help!

Silky Kilt: No. No. Uh-uh. Too green. Too yellow. Too poofy. Not poofy enough. Too frilly. Too shiny. Now go on, my dear. You were telling me where you're from.

Sunny: I've [grunt] been... sent... from Canterlot... to--

Silky Kilt: Huh? Canterlot? Oh, I am so envious. The glamor, the sophistication. I have always dreamed of living there. I can't wait to hear all about it. We are gonna be the best of friends, you and I. Emerald? What was I thinking? Let me get you some rubies.

Sunny: Quick, before she decides to dye my coat a new color.

Donnie: Wasn't she wonderful?

Sunny: Focus, Casanova. What's next on the list?

Donnie: [clears throat] Oh. Music. It's the last one.

[birds singing]

Scaredy Pumpkin: Oh my. Um, stop, please, everyone. Um, excuse me, sir. I mean no offense, but your rhythm is just a teeny tiny bit off. Now, follow me, please. A one. A two. A one-two-three--

Sunny: Hello! Oh my. I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to frighten your birds. I'm just here to check up on the music and it's sounding beautiful. I'm Sunny. What's your name?

Scaredy Pumpkin: Um... [mumbling] I'm Scaredy Pumpkin.  

Sunny: I'm sorry, what was that?

Scaredy Pumpkin: Uh... [mumbling] My name is um... Scaredy Pumpkin.

Sunny: Didn't quite catch that.

Scaredy Pumpkin: [squeaky voice]Scaredy Pumpkin.

Sunny: Well, um, it looks like your birds are back, so I guess everything's in order. Keep up the good work.

Scaredy Pumpkin: [squeaky voice] You've very welcome.

Sunny: Ooookay. Well, that was easy.

Scaredy Pumpkin: A baby dragon! Oh, I've never seen a baby dragon before. He's so cute.

Donnie:  Well well well.

Scaredy Pumpkin: Oh my, he talks. I didn't know dragons could talk. That's just so incredibly wonderful. I... I just don't even know what to say.

Sunny: Well, in that case, we better be going.

Scaredy Pumpkin: Wait, wait. What's his name?

Donnie: I'm Donnie.

Scaredy Pumpkin: Hi, Donnie. I'm Scaredy Pumpkin Wow, a talking dragon! And what do dragons talk about?

Donnie: Well, what do you wanna know?

Scaredy Pumpkin:  Absolutely everything!

Sunny: [groan]

Donnie: Well, I started out as a cute little yellow-and-blue egg.

Donnie: And that's the story of my whole entire life. Well, up until today. Do you wanna hear about today?

Scaredy Pumpkin: Oh yes, please!

Sunny: I am so sorry. How did we get here so fast? This is where I'm staying while in Ponyville, and my poor baby dragon needs his sleep.

Donnie: No I don't. Waah!

Sunny: Awww, wook at that. He's so sweepy, he can't even keep his wittle bawance.

Scaredy Pumpkin: Poor thing. You simply must get into bed.

Sunny: Yes yes. We'll get right on that. Well, goodnight.

Donnie: Huh. Rude much?

Sunny: Sorry, Donnie, but I have to convince the Princess that Night Mare Moon is coming and we're running out of time. I just need to be alone so I can study without a bunch of crazy ponies trying to make friends all the time. Now where's the light?  


Sunny: [groan]

Sparkleblue: Surprise! Hi. I'm Sparkleblue and I threw this party just for you. Were you surprised, were you, were you? Huh huh huh?

Sunny: Very surprised. Libraries are supposed to be quiet.

Sparkleblue: That's silly. What kind of welcome party would this be if it were quiet? I mean, duh, bo-ring. You see, I saw you when you first got here, remember? You were all, hello, and I was all, [gasp], remember? You see I never saw you before, and if I never saw you before that means you're new, 'cause I know every pony, and I mean every pony in Ponyville, and if you're new, then it meant you haven't met anyone yet, and if you haven't met anyone yet, you must not have any friends, and if you don't have any friends then you must be lonely, and that made me so sad, and I had an idea, and that's why I went [gasp], I'll just throw a great big ginormous super-duper spectacular welcome party and invite everyone in Ponyville. See? And now you have lots and lots of friends.

(Sunny's face turns red)

Cherryjack:  Are you alright, sugar cube?

[train whistle]

Sparkleblue:  Awwww, she's so happy, she's crying.

Donnie: Hot sauce. Ew.

Sparkleblue: What? It's good!

Sunny: [groan]

Donnie: Hey Sunny! Sparkleblue is starting Pin The Tail on the Pony. Wanna play?

Sunny: No! All the ponies in this town are crazy! Do you know what time it is?

Donnie:  t's the eve of the Summer Sun Celebration. Everypony has to stay up or they'll miss the Princess raise the sun. You really should lighten up Sunny. It's a party.

Sunny:    [mocking] You really should lighten up Sunny. It's a party. Here I thought I have time to learn more about the Elements of Harmony, but, silly me, all this ridiculous friend-making has kept me from it! Legend has it that in the longest day of the thousandth year the stars will aid in her escape and she will bring about everlasting night. (moon in eyes) I hope the Princess was right. I hope it really is just an old pony tale.

Donnie:  Come on, Sunny! It's time to watch the sun rise!  

Sparkleblue:      Isn't this exciting? Are you excited, 'cause I'm excited, I've never been so excited, well, except for that time that I saw you walking into town and I went [gasp] but I mean really, who can top that?

Mayor: Fillies and gentlecolts, as mayor of Ponyville, it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Sun Celebration.

[crowd cheers]

Mayor: In just a few moments our town will witness the magic of the sunrise, and celebrate this, the longest day of the year. And now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria--

Scaredy Pumpkin: Ready?

Mayor Princess Celestia!

    [crowd gasps]

Sunny: This can't be good.

Mayor: Remain calm, everypony. There must be a reasonable explanation.

Sparkleblue: Ooh! Ooh! I love guessing games. Is she hiding?

Silky Kilt: She's gone.

Sparkleblue:  Ooh, she's good. [scream]

Sunny: Oh no. Night Mare Moon!

Donnie: [faints]

Night Mare Moon: Oh, my beloved subjects. It's been so long since I've seen your precious little sun-loving faces.

4-Leaf Clover: What did you do with our Princess?

Cheeryjack: Whoa there, Nelly!

Night Mare Moon: [chuckles] Why, am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?

Sparkleblue: Ooh! Ooh! More guessing games! Um... Hokey Smokes! How about Queen Meanie? No! Black Snooty, Black Snooty!

Night Mare Moon:  Does my crown no longer count, now that I have been imprisoned for a thousand years? Did you not recall the legend? Did you not see the signs?

Sunny: I did, and I know who you are. You're the Mare in the Moon. Night Mare Moon.

Night Mare Moon:  Well well well, somepony who remembers me. Then you also know why I'm here.

Sunny:  You're here to... to... [gulps]

Night Mare Moon: [chuckles] Remember this day, little ponies, for it was your last. From this moment forth, the night will last forever! [evil laugh]

  • Listening to: The Smurfs theme song
  • Watching: The Smurfs
JellyBeanAddict27 Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, and can Midnight Bloom be Zecora?
Rainbow-Cookies15 Feb 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sure x3
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